“You Held Me.”

I originally wanted to create an adventure game in Inform7, but the coding eventually proved far too complex for me as I’ve never dealt with coding before, so I eventually utilized hypertext, which I found to be far simpler (though I never did manage to include pictures or change the background colors). I ended up creating a poem entitled “You Held Me” in which the reader can guide themselves through the story by choosing various body-related nouns. I don’t really want to explain what it’s about, as I would rather the reader draw their own conclusions, but if you stick with it long enough, you can read every stanza and it will all come full circle.

You Held Me.

– Ariel Dantona

  4 comments for ““You Held Me.”

  1. March 2, 2012 at 10:52 am

    Hey girl! I just wanted to let you know that your link to the project does not work. I think that you might have posted the link but not the public link. Perhaps you should try to repost the public link.

  2. hholden
    March 2, 2012 at 1:06 pm

    In response to the previous comment, the link works fine on my computer. I am not sure if this is because it has already been edited.

    Anyways, I really enjoyed reading your project. I really liked the fact that you had a very extensive variety of paths that could be taken. The poem itself was very creative and I enjoyed reading it. I could tell you probably put a lot of effort into this piece of work. Very descriptive!

  3. Ariel
    March 12, 2012 at 9:07 am

    Oh, wow! Thank you so much :).

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