The Story of Orville V. Wright

“The Human Mystery” by Alan Bigelow tells the fictional story of the socially anxious Harvard anthropology professor, Orville V. Wright. “The Human Mystery” does not fall neatly into any genre of electronic literature we’ve discussed, but I would say it’s most similar to hypertext. The story is made up of seven different sections accessed through a timeline menu; the reader drags an arrow along the timeline to select a segment. The sections can be accessed in any order and once finished  disappear from the screen. Each of the seven sections is named after a different stage in human evolution, starting with Prokaryota in the primordial ooze and ending with the Present Day. Every segment has two parts, one giving Professor Wright’s explanation and thoughts on the title organism and a second detailing Wright’s life as an academic and his failed marriage. The surprise end of the story is within a postscript section, I won’t spoil it for anyone.

The layout of every section features a text box on the right with arrows at the bottom allowing the reader to move forward or backward in the text. A large picture, which differs in every section sits on the left at some point throughout the text other images float or flash over this background picture. These can be controlled sometimes by clicking on footnotes in the text. The images that appear generally relate to text, such as the divorce paper that appears when Wright’s divorce is being discussed. Other times the images pop up to highlight an aspect of Wright’s story. The ability to control what text appears on the screen is similar to hypertext fiction’s use of links to move the story forward. In “The Human Mystery” the control is much more straightforward within the sections with only a right arrow to go forward, a left arrow to go backward, and a double human symbol indicating the end/beginning of the subsections. This is different than hypertexts such as Robert Kendall’s “Dispossession“ or Shelley Jackson’s “my body – a Wunderkammer” which have a large amount of narrative permutations depending on the order in which links are clicked. In “The Human Mystery” the sections can be accessed in any order the reader desires, but once inside a section the story is strictly linear, forwards or backwards. Although you can read the sections backwards, I would not advise it because the narrative is forwardly linear.

“The Human Mystery” is very different from the other works I’ve read/watched/experienced by Bigelow, “Brainstrips” (which I wrote about before) and “American Ghosts” (also covered on our blog). “The Human Mystery” can be seen as a dressed up version of a traditional text-only story with moving and still images compared to his other works.  ”Brainstrips” is a multi-genre work combining aspects of comics, hypertext, and kinetic typography. “American Ghosts” is a series of videos with text running along the bottom. Both “Brainstrips” and “American Ghosts” lack the cohesive narrative found in “The Human Mystery.” Instead they focus on the fallibility of human knowledge and the lives of people named after historical figures respectively through several different narratives.

One aspect all of these works share is the inclusion of background music and sounds. In “The Human Mystery” each section has a soundtrack relating to the title organism, for example the section on Homo habilis, an early tool-making hominid features a soundtrack made up of the workshop sounds of hammers and someone sanding. “The Human Mystery” soundtrack sets up a mood for each section that works well with the story, unlike in “Brainstrips” in which I turned off the sound halfway through because it distracted me from the story.

“There are secrets that are kept from the public and then there are ‘public secrets’

In the work “Public Secrets” by Sharon Daniel and Erik Loyer, the secrets of the California State Prison are revealed through a compilation of statements from those currently imprisoned. The work begins with an intro defining a ‘public secret’ as a secret that is known but the public pretends to be oblivious to, in this case, the truth behind the state prison system.

The work is broken into sections, each about a different part of life in the prison. When viewing statements about the inside, one reads about what life was like inside the prison walls. Such a life is described as miserable, unfair, and full of mistreatment. One inmate asks

 referring to a fellow inmate that died waiting for treatment with the co-pay required by the prison health staff in her hand. This situation represents only a fraction of the instances of mistreatment that occur in the prison.

 

   

These situations are depicted as quotes from various inmates about their experiences in the jail. There are numerous quotes on each page and they can be clicked on to hear the inmate themselves making the statement. Having the ability to hear the inmate themselves makes the statements seem that much more real. This ability is one unique to electronic literature and if the work was simply a bunch of quotes on a piece of paper, it would be much less significant in its meaning. Also, the way in which the work is organized, into separate boxes

    with strict separation between the quotes mimics the way the prison is run — clear cut and strict, no overlapping or blending of inmates and daily activities. Again, this illustrated separation is something that works only for electronic literature and would have no meaning in a normal literary text. As with previous works I have read, the importance of electronic literature is apparent in its unique capabilities that make this work the creative piece that it is.